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Warren
July 25, 2005, 02:11 AM
A handgun nearby

loving mother rests her feet

children sleep soundly




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early morning fog

goblins look for easy repast

man with Glock fears not


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her first bullseye scored

daughter's smile luminous

gun culture lives on


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So how are these? I've never done poetry before.


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winstonsmith
July 25, 2005, 02:15 AM
ratch click-click blam blam
blam blam blam blam blam blam ping
Garand trumpet sings

Stickjockey
July 25, 2005, 08:27 AM
That's just beautiful, man.

Preacherman
July 25, 2005, 10:03 AM
(Wipes tear from eye)

So... so... SOULFUL!!!

(Sniffs)

:D

LaEscopeta
July 25, 2005, 11:32 AM
It could be loaded
Or it could be empty, butÖ
To me its loaded

Where is it pointed?
Know it is pointed safely
Or donít pick it up

Always the same way
Sight target, decide to shoot
THEN finger in guard

The bullet canít see
So I have to look for it
Till where it will stop

DirtyBrad
July 25, 2005, 11:35 AM
The High Road forum
Some nuts, some tinfoil hats
And now poetry

dolanp
July 25, 2005, 11:45 AM
Do they have a gun
Will they be my next victim
Or will I be his

utahminirevolver
July 25, 2005, 12:00 PM
Lucky snoozed in front of the tent
while Martha and I set up empty tea cans on a log
at the bottom of a dry gulch
for some afternoon's plinking with our pocket revolvers.

Later on, as the moon rose over pine-covered mountains,
and an owl hooted, before slumber overtook
us tired hikers, I reflected on what a great country
this is, and said a little prayer of thanks.

(Oops,not a haiku, I just realized.)

MikeJackmin
July 25, 2005, 06:04 PM
Bang! Click. What, again?
Stupid wolf ammo. It stinks.
Buy white box next time.

MikeJackmin
July 25, 2005, 06:09 PM
SHTF time -
9 millimeter no good.
Zombies ate my brain.

Warren
December 31, 2005, 02:33 AM
My very first kid

demanded trip to gunstore

one happy daddy



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2k5Adam
December 31, 2005, 02:57 AM
Nineteen eleven A one.
Proven in war time.
Good enough for me.


The High Road dot org.
Great place to learn.
Great people to meet.

sm
December 31, 2005, 02:58 AM
Tyranny Enough

Quill, Parchment, Muskets Spew Lead

We The People Free

MarkDido
December 31, 2005, 04:41 AM
Heheheh

Who says gun owners aren't intellectual!

HighVelocity
December 31, 2005, 05:02 AM
Look, there's a Zombie
I have more bullets than it
Bang! undead is dead

:evil:

Cosmoline
December 31, 2005, 06:17 AM
Cold clear arctic sun
Pierces the Cook Inlet fog
Just like a bullet

Warm wood Mosin stock
Nestles against my rising chest
Like a warm puppy

KriegHund
December 31, 2005, 07:04 AM
It tis not haiku proper, but hey, its fun...

Cloudy sky, earths shield from the sun;
Protects me well, we are one
Forest i love, senses so keen
Crunch of needles, ever so green

Shiny brass of the gray sunlight
May rain! All will be right!
Rain .223 brass, i think :p
For oh how i love to plink!

The action slides, beautiful sight
Harsh noise causes fright
But me, it is natural beauty!

And another one about my mauser....

Stripper clips
Load em by five

Gone in a second,
Busy as a bee in a hive

Clack, boom
Repeat it by five!

Five five five,
Five aimed shots!
All in a pie!

And one last one,

Forests are a love truer than any else,
Few are privilaged enough to appreciate,
I am.

And oh how i do love it so,
Every lost inch is a crime, personal afront
I could lose myself to easily, were i not wary!

But, i wish i could lose myself
My heart longs for it to be so...
My mind knows better. How i wish it did not!

Hm, i pity the poor souls who see naught of nature but a planted palm in a park!

El Tejon
December 31, 2005, 07:40 AM
In tribute to the bear killers of THR:

Lions, pumas, bears!
What gun for these animals?
Pour out your whiskey!

In tribute to the gun nuts:

Which gun? Gun, gun, gun.
Hardware no, software yes, sir.
Training is the way.

pax
December 31, 2005, 08:36 AM
Handgun Control says
its laws would make the world safe.
Fat chance: thugs are armed.

Rosie O'Donnell
says no one should own a gun.
Her bodyguard does.

Sarah Brady says
a handgun shot her husband.
Hinckley bore no guilt?

The ACLU
says speech is a basic right.
But self defense? No.

Million Mom March says
Grassroots organization.
Hardly. It's a front.

Janet Reno says
Registration's the beginning.
She's wrong: it's the end.

pax

Biker
December 31, 2005, 09:38 AM
Empty the beer can
Set up sixty feet downrange
Carefully take aim

Biker
:evil:

Sistema1927
December 31, 2005, 02:27 PM
SASS version:

Single-actions sing
Lever Action knocks them down
Side by Side to end

Czar
December 31, 2005, 03:23 PM
Little Makarov
Kalashnikov, Simonov
I love Russkie guns

CZ75
Satin Nickle on ankle
An Ace in the hole

Two Seven Off-Suit
Why did I fold it this time
Would have flopped full house


I did not write this one, I read it several years ago over on AR15.com and it has stuck with me
Author Unknown, but appreciated!
AR-15 Haiku:
A Gun so Precise
As to shoot balls off of mice
Damned thing still shoots left

sm
December 31, 2005, 03:31 PM
Nantucket she from

Want piece this Action asked she

Boys run off -damn gun!

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Next one dedicated to pax Hey I stay in trouble :p

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Five boys- me oh my!

Plastic Pipe, Tape, Hairspray -Why?

Spuds launch into Sky.

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No_Brakes23
December 31, 2005, 04:18 PM
AK gets job done
AR more accurate, even
better, M1A

California has
worse gun laws than most, but no
length limit, folding knives

Cali was once
Paradise, but popular
leftists ruin Eden

My assault rifle
is not illegal, it's just
undocumented

THR members
Say drinking and shooting is bad,
But the Swiss do it

Those deserve neither
Who would trade their liberty
for a false safety

"Magazines not Clips!"
Snobs say, but Remington and
Marlin call them clips

The Thirty Ought Six, one
Hundredth anniversary must
Buy Garand this year

Rouguerunner
December 31, 2005, 04:35 PM
Noobie yes I am
Found this forum, pray for me
There's no turning back

Sistema1927
December 31, 2005, 05:46 PM
Roguerunner is new
Nine posts to his name we see
He will catch on fast

Dionysusigma
December 31, 2005, 06:23 PM
My user name is
Dionysusigma; too
Long to write a poem. :)

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Kalashnikov and Makarov
Plus comrade S. Simonov
Are famous each for their respective gun;

But from John Garand and JMB,
The M-1 and 1919
Are the best, if only 'cause we won. :neener: :D

wheelgunslinger
December 31, 2005, 06:52 PM
one ragged hole
but it jams again
my p3-4-5

a crow caws loudly
deer hoof crunches leaf
moth sits on arrow

pluvo
December 31, 2005, 07:08 PM
Funny this should come up. I used to write poetry in my youth and at one time I was on a haiku discussion list. I was looked down upon because I didn't always use a 'nature' word in my haiku as required to be 'true' to form. Of course, I argued that mine were about the 'nature' of humanity.

On being not a vicim:

Synapses fire
Muscles expand and contract
Veins begin to burn.

A man f*cks with me
Knife slides smoothly between ribs
I continue on.

Man busts up my car
Run him down at ninety-five
New hood ornament.

Man breaks in my house
My gun barks twice, drag him in
Go on back to sleep.

A single gunshot,
Like blood-red punctuation,
Ending the sentence.

Sunlight glints off brass
Arcing gently through the air,
Landing at my feet.

The smell of cordite
Perfume in the rancid air
Burns at my nostrils.

As I stomp you down
Big black boots now black and red
A graphic footprint.

Hidden among us;
You cannot spot a killer
By the shoes he wears.

Cool acts of violence
I don't insult my victims
By feeling sorry.


A friend of mine & I used to ponder mimes in much the same way zombies are discussed here on THR:

Invisible box,
The man within shot once; twice,
What sound does he make?

Calliope plays
Another dead harlequin,
Blood stains a white face.

Silencer, of course
His gun is fast...mine faster,
Shots break the silence.

The now severed head
Takes the steps two at a time,
Smile still intact.



Written during the 1st Gulf War. Same as it ever was...

Foreign diplomats
Refuse to admit to their sins;
With insincere smiles.

Through the viewfinder,
Moonlight plays on quiet streets
In this strange city.

I wait in darkness,
And watch the war on TV,
Feeling only cold.

roo_ster
December 31, 2005, 11:37 PM
I don't know whether to be disturbed, inspired, humbled, or just copy them all down for future reference.

Bruce333
December 4, 2006, 08:08 PM
Yes,....I had to revive this thread...


got my C and R
milsurps sent straight to my door
my money all gone

El Tejon
December 4, 2006, 08:15 PM
See old greasy gun
I plant the gun in the ground
I mock Pelosi.

wuluf
December 4, 2006, 08:16 PM
1911
reliable and lovely
a timeless design

crunker
December 4, 2006, 08:46 PM
I ROFL'd at the second one.

Come and try to take
my rights and you must
feel 10-emm-emm punishment

the pistolero
December 4, 2006, 09:32 PM
Big ugly Ruger
3 AM pounding at door
BOOM! BOOM! Dead goblin.
:D

Jim March
December 4, 2006, 10:39 PM
A goblin comes in,
357 flies true,
Oh WOW is he dead!

:)

By the way, it's:

5
7
5

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Not by me, but one of the best gun-related short ditties ever:

"Here lies the body of Lester Moore,
Shot six times with a 44...
No Les, no more."

Sage of Seattle
December 5, 2006, 12:00 AM
Oh, guys! This is cool.

My normal poetry is either very romantic or pretty lewd. I'm thinking this is a good inspiration to write something new about something I love other than women.



Pistol in my hand
The ground carpeted by shells
My grin is wicked


:evil:

matis
December 5, 2006, 12:49 AM
By sm: (post 13)

Tyranny Enough

Quill, Parchment, Muskets Spew Lead

We The People Free





By matis:

Freedom soured with time

Maybe soon need to water

Freedom's tree again




matis

Warren
December 5, 2006, 04:35 AM
Excellent work, people.

svtruth
December 5, 2006, 08:25 AM
Loved the .44
Then I wanted some more
Buffalo Bore!

Stickjockey
December 5, 2006, 10:28 AM
Sharp smell of sulphur
ball of flame, blueish smoke cloud
black powder is fun!

Mr White
December 5, 2006, 10:31 AM
squeeze on the trigger
a fireball shoots through the air
Yeah, M Forty Four

bang bang bang bang bang
bang bang bang then there's a ping
I love my Garand

pull the bolt straight back
all six shots in the ten ring
K thrity ones Rock

evil black rifle
some say that its a mouse gun
AR fun to shoot

strambo
December 5, 2006, 11:31 AM
Afghanistan night
Taliban skulk, scurry and scheme
First light, meet Allah


My first haiku...it was a neat night tonight, snow on the mountains, moon out. No drama though...

TexasRifleman
December 5, 2006, 11:44 AM
Lorcin by my side
Bad man knocking on the door
Oops I am dead man

Vitamin G
December 5, 2006, 12:02 PM
BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG
BANG BANG BANG-PING, BANG BANG BANG
BANG BANG BANG BANG-PING


:D

TrapperReady
December 5, 2006, 12:05 PM
Sunlight warms the frost
Shots ring out both near and far
It's opening day.



It's Wayne LaPierre
Recorded voice on my phone
He wants more money.



Gun dog stops on dime
Tail upright, body frozen
I'd better not miss.

Squidward
December 5, 2006, 12:40 PM
Squidward wants to play
Tried to script a gun Haiku
Shot self in the foot

Zero_DgZ
December 5, 2006, 01:20 PM
Bang bang bang bang bang
Bang bang bang bang bang bang bang
Bang bang bang, reload

BigG
December 5, 2006, 01:30 PM
Gunfire erupts
Light dazzles eyes
Smoke wrinkles nose

:)

nelson133
December 5, 2006, 02:37 PM
Friends go to the range
air thick with smoke, brass on floor
work is forgotten

the pistolero
December 5, 2006, 05:34 PM
Shoot Ruger wheelgun
Gun snobs say, best you can do?!
I tell them, get bent...

SuperNaut
December 5, 2006, 06:12 PM
Eight brass cartridges
suspended in the cool air
smoke curls from locked slide

Speed draw double tap
Mozambique and then footwork
RO out to lunch

Owen
December 5, 2006, 06:22 PM
The chill wind nips my
ears as the hammer falls and
the bullet arcs home.

wheelgunslinger
December 5, 2006, 06:27 PM
weeding my garden
a bear on the hill says "woof"
and ambles back home

winter's frozen breath
freezes brass in icy hands
that crunch under foot

deer season is gone
winter is the time for school
back to the high road

DRZinn
December 5, 2006, 07:13 PM
Haiku are easy.
Iambic pentameter:
More of a challenge.

p35
December 5, 2006, 07:47 PM
John Browning's P-35:
So far it's kept me alive
Some sneer at the nine
I say it's just fine
With credit to Dieudonne Saive


OK, it's a limerick, but WTH.

SamTuckerMTNMAN
December 5, 2006, 09:07 PM
Stoic mountains rise
call of the red tail beckons
I AM the forest

Our races, brothers
are united by the gun
keeping souls alive

history teaches
that when you take my weapon
you will call me : SLAVE

Spirit of Freedom
centuries old welcome here
nostrils flare, I breath

ST

sm
December 5, 2006, 09:10 PM
Twenty-eight gauge shotguns
Handsome wood and blue of course
Fell target, and game, fun!

Mr White
December 5, 2006, 10:03 PM
Three hundred Win Mag
recoil hurts my shoulder
I'll take my M1

Browning Hi Power
fits nicely in my left hand.
load another mag.

ground piled high with brass
no one ever cleans the range
what a bunch of pigs

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