Have, Mosin, Will Travel (A Mutant Chronicles Story)


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Drgong
August 29, 2008, 03:18 PM
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Drgong
August 29, 2008, 04:54 PM
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Drgong
August 29, 2008, 05:26 PM
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Jorg Nysgerrig
August 29, 2008, 06:14 PM
You really should proofread, or at a minimum spell/grammer check, the story before posting it.

Drgong
August 29, 2008, 06:25 PM
fair nuff

Catshooter
August 29, 2008, 06:32 PM
I like it: and thank you for knowing that paragraphs are a big help.

If you want help, I'd say shorten up some of the sentences a bit. Some of us have short attention spans :)


Cat

Drgong
August 29, 2008, 07:51 PM
Don't worry, I did not have a good spell checker, I will overhaul it later on, and rewrite sections of it, and repost it.

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