[mguffey]

http://thearmedcitizen.com/gunpages/llamasub.htm

Images, comments, (even) negative remarks solicited.

Send it to armedcitizen00@hotmail.com or just post it here.

[PlayTheAces]

Check your first sentence - "...Boubon into a fresh would...". Did you mean wound?

[denfoote]

Has the quality risen??

I have a Galil (IAI) Commander clone that has turned out to be a gem in the rough!! I have taken to carrying it on a regular basis, as a more concealable alternatitive to my Springer!!

The fact that it's a "bargin based" pistol should not be a problem as long as the quality is present!!

[mguffey]

Yes, bourbon into a fresh wound is what it should be.
Spell/grammar checker must be on the fritz.

The problem with Llama, as with other less expensive
brands is not so much a lack in quality as an
inconsistency in quality. The time taken to refine
and test fire each production model is either less
or simply non-existent. Such inconsistency has a
long term and generally valid impact on a manufacturer's
credibility in the marketplace.

[George Hill]

The blue background with red text links made my eyes cross.
The green on the blue is also hard to read.

[Zundfolge]

I'm not fond of tiled backgrounds in web pages ... makes them harder to read (and look less then professional).

I'd recommend a solid color (and I'd stay away from real bright or primary colors ... go more with a muted color). And I'll echo George's comments about type color. Actually reversed out white on a dark background is a little harder to read then dark on light, but with a solid color I don't think it would be bad. However when the type and background are either too close to the same value (brightness...like the red and blue you used) or if they are complete opposites on the color wheel (like red and green) they become painful to read.

I'd also turn the Llama logo into a link to the Llama homepage (I think people are used to clicking on logos).

In addition, while the Llama isn't a well liked pistol in these parts, its going to be nice to have some place to point people when they ask for info on them.

[Flashpoint]

I agree with Zundfolge and George Hill.

I would also change the red text to maybe yellow or orange if it stayed blue.

Maybe change the background to black with a string of repeating handgun images on the left side if you just really wanted something in the background.