New Online Fiction Story - Lost and Found

C'mon, can't the chapters be posted here, too?

My work blocks arfcom.

Sawdust

Halffast,
First off I like your story. Keep it up.
Second: I have heard others talk about Lights Out enough times to finally start on it last night. I stayed up to freakin 0400 reading. I am tired and my eyes hurt.
All I can say is: Do you have any more pieces?

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I favorited the thread at ar15.com, it worked fine for months but now only the home page comes up? Is the thread in the archives? Anyone have the new link?

Halffast,

Excellent start...you are truly a very gifted writer.

More please...let us know when the next chapters are posted. If you decide to publish I would be more than happy to buy it.

THANKS for your great stories

Lights Out is a story that really sticks with you.
I'm sure this one will be as good.
I won't be able to read it for another week or two as I am working 12 hours a day/7 days a week.
I am subscribing to this thread so I do not forget.

Wow, Great Read!

spoiler alert do not read if you have not read story.


DJ is looking for trouble, he should just tell her that her husband is dead and take the girls with him or leave.

halffast! is there more?

It's a great read so far, I cant get on arfcom as I don't have any email cept yahoo

The link isn't working for me- any idea why?

Never mind, I wasn't logged in there. Woohoo, another Halffast story!

its not working for me either..

c2k

Awesome! there's more! Unfortunately the link's down.. Internal error (500). I hope they fix it soon.

Back up! I'll be busy for a while...

Darn you, Halffast. Darn you to heck.

I finally got to read the Lights Out to the end.... is all I gotta say.. Put this in book format dangit.

yes yes yes.. *dances*

that chapter was way to short

need more...more ...more

Linky no worky.... Takes me to the ArfCom front page ad I can't find the story.

Thanks.

pretty good

DJ is correct in this case, but it sounds like he done scared his new girl friend.
If I were him I would scoot....
I guess he could have held them at gun point for the local authorities too, but all in all in a shtf situation it is the same as horse stealing was in the old days.

thanks..and on general pricniple (have nto read it yet..)

More please!