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Have, Mosin, Will Travel (A Mutant Chronicles Story)

Discussion in 'General Gun Discussions' started by Drgong, Aug 29, 2008.

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  1. Drgong

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    You really should proofread, or at a minimum spell/grammer check, the story before posting it.
     
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    fair nuff
     
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    I like it: and thank you for knowing that paragraphs are a big help.

    If you want help, I'd say shorten up some of the sentences a bit. Some of us have short attention spans :)


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    Don't worry, I did not have a good spell checker, I will overhaul it later on, and rewrite sections of it, and repost it.
     
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