Funny, until it was mentioned, I didn't see you in the first pic either. My brain did wonder how the gun was sitting there though, not touching the ground. GOOD JOB!
As for the rifle, too many "sharp" edges. The markings should be rounded. In nature, you very seldom see sharp edges in brush or plant life as is on your rifle. Round out the camo so that it blends with the other colors. If you look at most military arms (tanks, planes, etc..), there are no sharp points but rounded and blended into the other colors. Hard to explain. Looks nice through.
Wayne