I agree - the white-on-white makes it really hard to understand what's going on at first glance. You really have to take a second, and even then it's not very visually...attractive. Sorry if that sounds harsh, I'm not the best at critiquing.
Maybe something little warmer. Or how about a confrontation scene , BG in the living room family behind dad (or mom ) & them using a firearm to protect hearth and home
Let's get stereotypical... Mummy and Kiddy outside in a park (Oleg, you GOTTA work on that pasty cube-farm complexion anyway...) with a stereotypical "bad man" blurry in the deep background. Just wait until some innocent passerby walks by, or chop someone in...
I like the high-key look in this case. It lends a certain innocence to the whole affair.
That said, I think the gun would better be something partially concealed, and not OD green--the pistol, holster, and double mag pouch breaks that spell.
Sorry, but as a mom I don't like any of these images.
You need a parent's face in image #1 and lose the two extra mags. (I'm not packing 45 rounds in my kitchen every day to stop a BG that might break in.)
No "bra-size" play on words with an underage model please. It's creepy. (I'd have NO problem if this was someone over 21, and I'd prolly think it was clever.)
I don't get the rifle and peace sign bag image. Is that what this model really owns in real life???
Sorry to be the one critic in this thread ... it's just my two cents so feel free to disregard...
All I see at first glance is what looks like some sort of machine about ready to grab the little kid. Looking harder you can finally (barely) see the person with white clothes on.
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