MudPuppy
Member
A few things:
I like how the story unfolds slowly at first--it makes you scratch your head and things get a bit worse, and then a bit more, then a bit more. I really like that.
Most cars don't work--only a tiny fraction do. Gas is outta the dead ones.
Spot on with the 100k words (its actually 70k-100k preferred for an unproven author, iirc. Clancy or Stephen King can get away with using more words than needed, I don't think they'd cut David the same slack...unfortunately!)
Get it published--I need a few copies to send to friends.
I like how the story unfolds slowly at first--it makes you scratch your head and things get a bit worse, and then a bit more, then a bit more. I really like that.
Most cars don't work--only a tiny fraction do. Gas is outta the dead ones.
Spot on with the 100k words (its actually 70k-100k preferred for an unproven author, iirc. Clancy or Stephen King can get away with using more words than needed, I don't think they'd cut David the same slack...unfortunately!)
Get it published--I need a few copies to send to friends.