P95Carry
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lights out inspired me
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modifiedbrowning
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MudPuppy, I just finished reading your story. Great work! I enjoyed it very much, keep up the good work.
MaterDei
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I've started reading this story and am enjoying it very much. Well done!
BlackBearME
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I just finished this story, and I have to say, this is great work! I've been reading too many zombie stories lately, I was surprised when it ended and I hadn't seen any undead. Doesn't make it bad, though, just different.
I only have two real comments:
1) Like others said......"clips"/??????
2) You mentioned in there a bill to repeal the 26th amendment without explaining it....but when referencing it it sounded like the goal was to eliminate the two-term limit to the office of President. It was the 22nd Amendment that affixed the 2-term limit, not the 26th. Just some info.
Once again, great read!
I only have two real comments:
1) Like others said......"clips"/??????
2) You mentioned in there a bill to repeal the 26th amendment without explaining it....but when referencing it it sounded like the goal was to eliminate the two-term limit to the office of President. It was the 22nd Amendment that affixed the 2-term limit, not the 26th. Just some info.
Once again, great read!
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