Name change
Halffast,
I admit that I haven't really read your story yet, just glanced at the first page when the pdf file finished. What leaped out at me is the protagonist's first name: Mike Turner.
Now, what flashed through my mind was: Survivalist fiction--->Hero named Turner---> Turner Diaries---> "Race" fiction. In the other book, the protagonist is named Earl.
I'm not saying your book in any way resembles Andrew MacDonalds, but if I were a publisher, who has to wade through Lord knows how many manuscripts a day, If I made that connection (rightly or not), I'd think, "Aryan nutjob" and send it to the circular file. Scandal can sell books, but not when the scandal is the publishing of the book itself. Editors are like most of humanity-they want to do their jobs along the path of least resistance.
So, maybe Turner becomes Bender, or some other surname.
I hope to read and enjoy it soon!