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Ok, follow along here... Lets say someone orders a pizza. In between the order, and the delivery, the person is attacked by Zombies. That person "Turns" just as the pizza arrives... Pizza man is attacked, and bitten, but escapes.. Pizza man crashes his car a few hundred yards away, gets out, and begins to run towards the woods (away from the Zombies). Pizza man runs into the woods untill he drops, (pops a valve/passes out.. whatever), and falls to the ground within sight of a 'possum. Now you know that the first thing in the 'possum's mind is "Hey! I didn't know Pizza Shack delivered out here!" and wanders over for a few bites of said delivery man..

Now the 'possum is infected, and shortly the Pizza man gets up and wanders off mumbling "Trains... need... trains" (thats for the Far-Side folks out there).

The 'possum, now a Zombie, sees a bird nest in some lower branches of a tree. 'Possum climbs the tree, and attacks the nest. Bird defends the nest, and recieves a bite for its efforts. Bird is now infected.

Now because of the "Change" or because of feather loss, the bird can't fly. The bird wanders the limb of the tree. Shortly after dawn, the squirrels come out.

The bird atacks the squirrels. Now there are Zombie Squirrels.

As many of us have wondered, "What were they thinking when they developed the .17 cal. revolvers, rifles, autoloading pistols, even a machinegun!" ... Here is your answer.... ZOMBIE SQUIRRELS!!!

So make with the ZOMBIE SQUIRRELS already!!!




Ok, I was just bored waiting for the next chapter.:D
 
Actually with so many people infected, it is just a matter of time before you get "abberations"

1) the zombie that still thinks he is human and doesn't want brains. This is the zombie running around killing zombies and eating normal food. he/she smells bad, doesn't sleep, can't drown, but is probably immortal. (possibly the real objective of the zombie disease if it was manufactured, as the person could very well have strength and stamina beyond human limits)

2) the human who is bitten but his immune system kills the disease. The golden goose, the omega man, what have you. He/she is the person who by virtue of genetic roll of the dice may be natures solution to the problem.

3) the zombie who remembers he is human, like brains, and likes being a zombie. a "alpha zombie" if you will... one who can lead the undead. this is the zombie who has a rifle and tries to aim for the legs of the victims...

the larger the infected population, the greater the probability of one or more of these types appearing. If nothing else due to the vast yet often subtle genetic differences between individuals in a population.
 
Chapter 13 Part I

Chapter 13

The Late Congressman's Place

George and Renee Lincoln got out of their Dodge PowerWagon, along with Abbey O'Bannion when they'd reached her grandfather's land. Carl Heinrich had owned a rather impressive rural area, and the three of them were now at his house, a colonial style two story that was more like a mansion than a house. Of course he had been a successful city and country doctor before he went to Congress.
It was about 10 am, and the the three of them had gotten a chance to have a hearty breakfast before they went to the late Congressman's house. George had eaten a bagle stuffed with creamcheese and lox. Most of the times, George had a fairly normal breakfast, but occasionally, he would have a traditional Jewish meal. Abbey had never enjoyed this, but she thought smoked salmon was tasty, so she enjoyed one of the bagels. They'd also had oatmeal, and now they felt good as they walked up to the house.
As quickly as they had come, Abbey saw her uncle, Peter Heinrich, her mother's brother step out of the house holding a pump action shotgun.

"Who are y'all?" he asked, pumping the weapon, and holding it port arms at the group before he got a good look at Abbey, "Oh, Abbey. Abbey O'Bannion. Come here girl."
Abbey looked back at George and Renee, and walked ahead to her uncle. She walked up to the porch, and said, "These are good people, Uncle Pete. They helped me out, they have a place a few miles down the road."
Pete held his niece, laying the shotgun down on the floor. The two had a gentle hug, before Pete asked, "Where are your parents, and your brother?"
She got quiet looking at her uncle, who reminded her alot of her mom, and she started crying. "What?" asked Peter calmly, "What happened,knowing he wasn't going to like the answer."
"They're dead, Pete. They were killed."
"What?" asked Pete.
"My parents got killed coming down here."
"What, my sis?"
"Yeah, momma too."

The two of them cried for a while on the porch, while George and Renee tried to looK elsewhere, but after a few minutes, Uncle Pete said, "You two, why are you two here?"
"Oh, Pete, they saved me. It's George and Renee, and they saved me from getting killed."
"You guys, get up here. Is it true? Did you save my niece?"
"Yeah," said Renee, looking back at George. "We killed the... men that did all that."
"Well, then, I guess we'll take you in here. We ain't got much, but we'll try to help you out."
 
Chapter 13 Part II

The Mission Part II

The newly minted Sgt. Gary Sinclair was on the roof of the downtown federal building in Phoenix Arizona with eleven other men. Each was equipped with either an H&K MP-5 or a short barreled FAL. Gary had opted for the FAL himself. The FALs were DSA Arms carbines made for law enforcement that had found their way into the hands of the Arizona Posses as the police and National Guard had scrounged for virtually anything they could find.
The men also had equipped themselves with CamelBaK bladders, and load bearing equipment. The team had been as well prepared for the mission as they could, several phosphorus and HE grenades being handed out to the men, some of the few that could be found on short notice. But, for the mission they had been assigned, it still might not really be enough.
Sinclair was thinking about what he and the rest of the men had been told. On the 2nd to last level of the building there had been some kind of research project going on to try to find a cure for the zombie disease. Sinclair and his team had the task of finding the computer with the files in it, take the zip drives and hard drives with the experimental data, and get back to the roof for a hot extraction.
The men were all very grim about the mission they were about to undertake. But, Sinclair had had a chance to look at the current thread of progression. By now, all fifty states, including Hawai'i and Alaska had zobies running about, and no one had heard anything from the federal government concerning the crisis in the last twelve hours. Meanwhile, all of Europe, most of Asia, and several African nations had reported that the virus had infected large percentages of their countries.
If there wasn't a solution one way or another soon, there would be another dark ages.

The group of men ran up to an air vent on the top of the roof, and Hector Martinez, of the Phoenix Police Department SWAT Team put a prefab demo set on the vent, and blew it off. The men filed into the vent, snaking around until they came out in the penthouse of the building.
Sinclair looked around coming out of the vent first, and saw several generators, and several HVAC Units humming, doing their job in the building. The elevator was about 100 feet away. And there were several machines and backup generators humming between them and the doors.
"Okay men, move slowly. We're gonna move get to the elevator, and head for the 42nd floor."
The group of men were making their way down the corridor when one of the men let off a burst of ammo into the space between a couple of generators.
"Conserve your ammo!" yelled Sinclair.
"I saW something," said Kyle Hamm, a former Ranger. "I swear."
"Look, if you see a zombie, shoot, but make aure you have it in your sites. Conserve your ammo, we have no idea who's gonna be down there, how many zombies there will be. We'll have to be carefull."
The men moved down the corridor, then towards the end, a zombie came out from behind one of the HVAC units and Hamm shot him in the head with a three round burst from his MP-5. The zombie kept moving forward and hit Hamm's boot.
"Woo." said the Hamm, moving onto the elevator.

The team came out of the elevator on the 42nd floor, and saw nothing but white walls and a hallway with a bunch of doors on both sides. It had more of a doctor's office feel than a federal building feel. The men filed down the hall pointing at each door, as they moved.
"Well, we need to get to Room 4201 at the end of the hall." said Gary, "Watch your fields of fire."
They made it to the end of the hall unmolested, and got to 4201 where there was a key code reader."
"Oh, sh%t." said Gary.
"Can we get around that?" asked the demolitions guy.
"We can. I just don't know what'll happen if we try. Maybe the computer will fry. Maybe the room will blow. I don't know."
"Call in."
Gary tried to make the call, but the radio on his shoulder wouldn't put up anything other than static. "Somebody else. Try to call the HQ."
All the men tried and weren't able to get through on their radios.
"Okay men, we're gonna try it," he said, "Get back. Umm... move to the sides of the door, and we'll put a demo charge on it."
A minute later, the demo charge was set, and the men were waiting. That was when the door blew. The door came off, blasted inward, and the men piled into the room. Underneath the door was a zombie still struggling. Sinclair was amazed. Any normal man probably would have been either killed or horibly wounded. But this zombie was still alive. Sinclair pulled the Glock on his hip out, and shot the zombie in the head, sending a stream of blackish coloured blood pouring out of the wound on it's forehead.
Next, Stewart Clark, the computer guy said, "Gary, get over here. The computer is still good. I've got to pull the drives, and grab the portable memory."
Meanwhile the men all took pictures of the various experiments, and areas in the massive laboratory area. The whole research area took up about half that side of the building.

"Okay, we got to get out of here," said Sinclair.
The men all began to file out of the room, and get up to the roof. Once the elevator put them in the penthouse, they swept across the large maintenance area, pointing their weapons at various points. They got out onto the roof, and climbed aboard the waiting Blackhawk helicopter, and headed back to the HQ, explosions around them from the chaos now in the heart of Phoenix going on around them.
"Okay, Stu, please tell me you got everything."
"Oh yeah. I got it all," he said, his longish blonde hair flapping around as the helo flew, doors on both sides open.
 
Great story, but....you really need to learn the difference between "its" and "it's". I find this very annoying because I have to pause to change the sentence in my head for it to work. This breaks the flow.

Crebalfix, normally I’d agree with you, but in this case I’m more than willing to put aside my own grammar police mentality. Here we have Mordechai pumping out chapter after chapter of incredibly good zombie fiction with hordes of us virtually whipping him to put out even more. This thread is why I keep coming to THR lately. More, please!
 
In 3 years here at THR, I've refrained from posting in almost any online fiction story because if you can't say anything nice,... you know the rest.
















But YOUR story is hugely entertaining. Keep it up! :)
 
Chapter 14

Chapter 14

Fighting

General Isaac Stapleton got his site picture, and expended another round into the head of an oncoming zombie. This one falling flat like the others had in a big semi-circle around the General and the Admiral. He checked his ammo, and saw that he was running low on the last magazine for the P-90. Admiral Antonelli already had his pistol out, he was holding it, opposite of the good General, looking into the big warehouse like opening. The two had killed maybe one hundred zombies so far.
Antonelli thought to himself that it was alot like Doom, that game his son had been playing. But he quickly tried to get his head back in the task at hand. He had no idea how his son was doing. Or even if he was still alive. Dominick Antonelli would either have been in school, or in their Annapolis, Maryland home when this all happened. And while the household had several weapons in it, there wasn't that much ammunition in it.
"Gio, I'm almost out of ammo for the P90. You have any idea where they might have a weapons' locker here?" asked Antonelli.
"Nope. But, well, you see over there, that's some kind of control room in the far edge of the room over there. You wanna check?" asked Antonelli.
The two men moved deliberately with a jogging pace, getting over the bodies, until they made it to the room Antonelli had been talking about.
They got into the room, and saw the eviscerated body of a butter bar lietenant with the US Navy. He had a key ring,

and about 7 keys on him still though. "Okay. We ought to check everything in here," said Antonelli, "You still okay. Your wound?"
"Yeah, I am, I'll need to get a bandage, and get myseld fixed up, but yeah." said Stapleton looking around.
Antonelli began looking through the keys, trying to find the correct one. Meanwhile, Stapleton looked on and saw a locker with a key card on it. He walked over to it, and opened it with his card. Opening the door, he saw a weapon's locker with an M-4, a couple of Mossberg 12 gauges with US Navy written on them, and five Beretta M9 pistols. "We solved our problem," he said, pulling the M-4 out, and throwing a 12 gauge over to Antonelli. "Let's grab all the ammo we can."
They grabbed 12 gauge buckshot, and Stapleton began to load his magazines with a battlepack marked 5.56 NATO/Lake City. The bullets all had a green tip, and the boxes had "62 grain" marked on them along with a NATO cross symbol. "Okay, now, I found a map," said Antonelli. "The place I'd bet everyone is in is here," he said, pointing to a room marked "Primary Communication and Conference Room."
Isaac and Giovanni moved out, walking down the hall towards the room. The Admiral looked in front and saw a zombie male, a suit and tie on, face covered in streaks of dried blood begin to run at him. He aimed the shotgun, and fired, the blast of the 12 gauge "00" buckshot tearing into the abdomen of the zombie, and putting him on the floor. Antonelli loaded another shell into the weapon, and pumped, firing another round into it's head, streaming chunks of skull around the hall.
Isaac moved up to the corpse, and bent on his knees, looking through the formely undead's clothes for his wallet. Pulling out the zombie's wallet, he looked at it to see a card, the same kind of card that Giovanni Antonelli had. The same kind that Isaac Stapleton had. It was an access card to the bunker. And this man had it.
"Giovanni, do you know who this was?"
"Who?"
"This was Peter Welsh, the CEO of General Weapons' Research. But, only governmental officials and their families are supposed to be allowed in here. This doesn't make any sense."
"He is the leader of one of the biggest weapons' contractors, might not be right, but it doesn't surprise me."
"Let's move," said Stapleton.
The two walked down the hall and another zombie came at them, this one a bald man with a suit on as well. This time Stapleton shot first, the 5.56 NATO rounds tearing into the zombie's flesh. The rounds nearly tearing the flesh off of it's arms, and blowing chunks of it's chest away before Antonelli's Mossberg blew it's head off, with only a chunk of jaw left.
"Who's this one?" asked Antonelli running over to the body.
Stapleton pulled out the corpse's card and saw that his name had been Edward Schwartzmann. "This is Edward Schwartzmann. The CEO of Bank of North America. One of the richest men on the planet, and the owner of what is thought to be a bank on the Federal Reserve."
"Whoa, Isaac, how do you know this?"
"Because, for the past few months, I've been researching this stuff. And after the Congressman died, well, I studied who he'd been investigating."
"Explain this to me, Isaac. Whats all this about?"

Isaac Stapleton grabbed a cigarette from the dead man's coat pocket, and lit it up. "Do you know anything about how the money in the United States works? Like how the monetary system works specifically?"
"No," said Antonelli, as the men began to move again.
"Well, our money is printed up based upon a few different considerations. For one, how much do the bankers think we as a society will need to pay our debts, taxes, for a coke at the store. Next, how many outstanding debts does the government have. that's probably the most important consideration. Finally, thye have to print money in a certain ammount simply to maintain a certain stability in the world's currency system. Atleast that's the simplified version."
"Every year the government issues bonds, and the banks that make up the federal reserve print up, either on paper or in computer files make that money."
"Wait, you said the banks that make up the Federal Reserve?"
"Yeah," said Isaac.
"That's not like a federal government thing?"
"No. The whole thing is regulated federally, but, well, the Federal Reserve is actually a cartel. A legally sanctioned cartel run with government approval."
"Recently, in fact, for the past few years, the Federal Reserve has been printing up alot more money than normal. In fact, well all the while this has been going on, those loans we pulled with the Chinese to pay for Iraq? Well, that money is getting pumped back into the U.S. The Chinese have been dumping it back."
"That doesn't make any sense. If there's alot of money out there without more stuff, wouldn't there be an increase in the price of stuff?"
"Yeah. But haven't you noticed?"
"Well, there has been. I mean gas has been going up, but it always does. And everything else. But if you listen to the news it would just say, well that the inflation is about higher gas prices. Of course, this is the media we're talking about," said Antonelli smirking.
"Well, now we've seen a couple of big wigs with major corporations here that have heavy government connections. Something doesn't smell right here," said Stapleton.
They walked further down the hall, turned a corner, and saw a couple of military uniformed zombies, both in Army BDUs. Stapleton opened fire blowing a hole in the middle of one's forehead, the red dot attached to the M4 doing it's job. He turned to the other and saw it's head get blown apart like a watermelon by Antonelli's shotgun.
The two kept up until they got to the room. Stapleton looked at it, and pulled out his keycard. "Okay Gio, I'm gonna open the door, and you run in."
Antonelli nodded, and when Stapleton opened the door, Gio ran in, and looked ahead to see a Marine Colonel, and another man in a suit.

"Don't shoot! Don't shoot!" screamed the Marine Colonel. He looked to see his superior officer, and layed his Beretta M9 on the desk. Behind the Colonel, the man in the suit sat down at the desk and lit up a Marlboro Light, taking the smoke in, and rolling it around in his lungs. Stapleton sat down

at the desk, and layed the M4 there, pulling out another cigarette. Antonelli stayed standing though, and kept the shotgun at the ready. The Marine Colonel looked across at Stapleton, and said, "General, could I ask, where is everyone else?"
"Dead." he said, taking a drag.
"Dammit." said the Colonel.
"So, Mr. Braff, what are you doing here," asked Stapleton to the dark haired man in the suit.
"Well, I'm with the government, and-"
"No, you are not, you are the head of the Federal Reserve, you aren't with the government. How'd you get a pass here to a top secret government bunker?" asked Stapleton.
"Sir, what are you doing, this man is-"
"This man is not suppossed to be here," said Stapleton. "Or, everyone in the country should be allowed here. But not both. Anyway, this is-"
"General, what are you saying?" asked Benjamin Braff, stubbing his cigarette out, and standing up.
"Sit down, Mr. Braff."
"You can't-"
"Sit the F*&k down! Now!" screamed Stapleton. "I want answers, and I want them now!"
The Federal Reserve Chairman looked at Stapleton who had his hand on the M4. He eyed the Beretta next to the Colonel. Just then, Braff reached for the Beretta, and Stapleton pulled up the M4. But Braff was alot faster than Stapleton thought he would be, and Braff had the drop on Stapleton.
"Put your weapon down," said Braff, pointing the pistol at Stapleton's head.
"No, assmonkey, put your pistol down," said Antonelli, holding the barrel of the 12 gauge to Braff's neck.
Braff looked back to see an angry middle aged man pointing a Mossberg at the point between his head and his neck. He looked forward, and saw he still had Stapleton in his sites. It was a Mexican standoff. And Braff had never handled a gun in

his life. Braff looked around, and thought about taking the weapon when Stapleton lept forward to grab the pistol. He pulled the trigger, and nothing happened. It was right then that Stapleton grabbed his hand, and bent his wrist upwards, nearly

snapping it in a deceitfully strong grip. The pistol was now in Stapleton's hands, and Braff was laying on the ground clutching his hand in pain.
"Mr. Braff, you don't know the M9 Beretta very well I can see. The decocker was totally down. The weapon was on safe."
Braff looked up with anger in his eyes. It was the look of a man who is not often talked down to. Then, Antonelli looked over at Stapleton, "Assmonkey?"
"What did you expect? That I ask him to stop the ballyhoo and shananigans?"
Antonelli began to laugh, bursting out in laughter. As did Stapleton. And suddenly up came Braff, and Stapleton kicked him hard in the crotch sending him tumbling downwards again.
"What are you doing?" asked the Colonel.
"Look, this man is a traitor." said Stapleton. "I'm virtually certain he had something to do with the death of a U.S. Congressman, and I'm gonna prove it."
 
Hey mordechaianiliewicz I printed off what you had written so far and showed it to my engish teacher, she said that whoever had written it should definantly continue writing and have it published.:D

I don't recall anyone saying you have permission to sleep/eat/have a life...
+1 on that

Hurry need more.........
 
Sorry for the delay in responding.

From the wikipedia article:

"His stories typically feature one man or a small group of individuals up against powerful adversaries capable of using political and economic machinery in frightening ways. Ludlum's vision of the world is one where global corporations, shadowy military forces and government organizations conspire to preserve or undermine the status quo"

BTW I like Ludlum's better written works (he turned out a lot of rote, unremarkable books as well). The conspiracy dimension of your story reminded me of him.

He, however, had a plenitude of issues with realistic gun usage, altogether going more in-depth than many of his contemporaries (e.g. mentioned guns by name, usually real guns like Makarov or Tokarev).
 
very nice. keep it coming. getting really good. oh and thxs for bringing the shotguns in, you just went from a 10 out of 10 to an 11 out of 10 with the shotguns

I don't recall anyone saying you have permission to sleep/eat/have a life...

+2
 
Thankyou folks. Thanks Carpediem for the info on Robert Ludlum. I oddly enough thought, "How do I merge Dean Koontz with Tom Clancy?"

I wanted a horror story of zombie-esque topic that nevertheless has some conspiracy, some politics, and some good old shoot 'em up.

As for Sniper4Life, no way dude. Please. This is poorly written (in terms of editing) and frankly it's what I've been posting when I've been well, inspired. Ummm, well I get an inspiration to write for maybe 20 minutes, stop, and write again when it comes back.
 
Chapter 15

Documents in Texas

George and Renee Lincoln got done eating a plate full of chicken fried steak, mashed potatoes, and thick white sausage gravy. The meal was virtually devoured by the couple after not eating anything in about a day. Abbey's Uncle had fixed a fantastic meal with only a short ammount of time, and some steaks from what had been the late Carl Heinrich's freezer. George was drinking a tall glass of iced tea, and picking his teeth with a wooden toothpick when Renee stood up, and walked over to Peter Heinrich.
"So, Mr. Heinrich, I just want to thank you for the meal, and-"
"Oh, don't mention it," said Peter, "You saved my niece, and this is the least I can do for y'all." he said in a thick Texas accent.
"Well, there is something else," said Renee. "My husband followed your brother's career, and he was wondering if there was, well..."
"What, ma'am?"
"Well, there is a rumour going around the internet that Carl's death wasn't a heart seizure, or anything like it but was really well. He was killed. That's the rumour."
Peter Heinrich looked at Renee, and then at George, and back at Renee. He sat down heavily in one of the wooden kitchen chairs, and said, "Ah hell."
"Look y'all. I wouldn't tell you this if you hadn't saved Abbey. And I also wouldn't tell y'all this if... well if the undead weren't walking like theys was alive."
The two of them looked on, and Peter said, "Could you grab a little of that Bourbon whiskey out of the cupboard above ya' ma'am? And, George, could I have one of your smokes?"
The whiskey was on the table with a nice big glass as Peter lit a cigarette with a match from his pocket. He took a nice sized sip, and drew a good drag from the smoke before he began.
"You gotta realize, Carl was a rare breed in Congress. He'd been in Congress for 15 years. And was in the Texas Assembly before that. He waked in the muck, and the utter and complete... sh%$ that is Congress. And he never took more than he had to in order to keep his seat. He spoke out against, well against every bad thing, every evil thing that happened there. He didn't take nothin' off a nobody, and he stood up for liberty whenever he could."
"Thing is, he told me several times that the people who control things in Washington weren't the people. Weren't the Congressmen. They were the Military Contractors, the Federal Reserve Bankers, and a handfull of foreign governments who were connected to the banking and even the military Contractors. He also said that the only thing he ever really regretted was not speaking out against them at every oportunity he could."
Peter Heinrich took a final drag on the cigarette before stubbing it out before he continued. "You gotta realize, towards the end, this was getting to him. He was thinking about getting out of Congress in order to expose this stuff to the American people, and, just as he was, a General Isaac Stapleton, the current General of the Army came to him and gave him a whole bunch of stuff about it. And, he sent me a copy of that stuff the General gave him. Then, after that, he died."
"Do you still have copies of what General Stapleton gave him?" asked George, looking intently on Peter Heinrich.
"Yeah. Yeah I do." he said.
Peter stood up, and walked up the steps of the place and came back a minute later with a manila envelope full of papers. "This here is a copy of what he gave me."
George opened the manila envelope, and looked inside to see several file folders with various things marked on them. All of them had "eyes only" marked down. George thumbed through them, and saw several things, including a file marked "Lazarus Project" on it.
Renee looked at Peter, who had his face down, and asked, "Why did you do this? Why are you letting us look at this?"
"Because, downstairs there is a copy machine. I want you to copy everything in there. I'm the only person who knows this stuff. Atleast I was until I told y'all. Lotta people gotta know about this. If I don't make it, for whatever reason, we gotta get this out there. So people will know the truth."
 
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