I'd like to see an amendment that more clearly links self-defense as an intrinsic right inextricable to the right to exist:
We hold this truth to be self-evident, that all people are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, and that chief among these is the right to exist, and intrinsic to the right to exist is the right to defend one’s own life. Congress has a duty to honor the right of a citizen to exist. When a person takes action to physically harm another, they forfeit their right to live and place themselves in grave peril of being killed. Congress shall pass no law designed to protect or benefit aggressors, nor pass any law punishing citizens justifiably defending themselves, their family and loved ones.
maybe an additional amendment:
We hold that the right to self defense and defense of one’s family and property from the nefarious malice of criminals to be a basic and inalienable human right of every citizen. While it might be prudent for the people to elect constables whose goal is to keep the peace and enforce reasonable laws, the right of the citizen to defend one’s property, one’s family and one’s life and limb, shall never be usurped. The right to self defense being thus firmly established, the right of citizens to procure, to keep and to bear arms shall never be infringed.
I'd like to see an amendment that sets firearms as a separate class of property:
No citizens shall be disarmed, nor their arms taken from them, unless temporarily so on a presentment or indictment of a Grand Jury and permanently only after being convicted of a capital, or otherwise infamous crime after receiving due process of law. Any citizen who has had their arms taken from them and are found innocent or exonerated have a right to the speedy return of their arms.
And:
The right to bear arms being necessary for the existence of a free society, Congress shall make no law creating any taxes, fees, tariffs nor levies on the manufacture, sale, purchase, transportation, ownership, possession or carriage of arms by the People.