I thought that was good. Clearly showed you folks were having a good time.
The editing didn't bother me.
I use vids to further my shooting skillz.
So, here's what I noticed: the lass had a malfunction and cleared it well. BUT, I also noticed that she closed her eyes during her shots.
I couldn't tell about the others. The dude in black shirt looked comfortable shooting.
Great times, it seems.