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Oleg Volk

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Here's my situation: I have this image which I like a great deal. I'd like to pick a caption which carries one of the following messages:

1. complying with gun control is more dangerous than resisting

OR

2. gun control put kids in danger back then, and does now

OR

3. times haven't changed all that much, governments still can't be trusted

OR

...maybe something else entirely. I feel that the current captions are too didactic and waste the potential of the image. I got about tewnty different captions and like none of them. Ideas?
 
Ive seen some of your last efforts... I think your posters can speak for themselves... What I mean is, you seem to spell out what it is the viewer is looking at in the caption at the top in your posters. Often times, the image already says it all. So, all you really end up needing is some simple hook phrase. My opionion only of course....

In this one, if you put the Jewish arm band around the girls left arm, everyone will know she is a German Jew of WW2 times.

Then just a simple hook like...

This tool saved my life...or,

My gun, my freedom....

Again, just my opionion... Thanks for your effort though!!!


Diesle
 
I think you should paraphrase Santayana: those who do not remember the past are condemned to repeat it.

I think overtly drawing attention to "children" is a negative. Let them draw that inference from the image themselves, so choices 1 or 3 for me please.

Hell, there are people afraid of brass casings when it comes to the "children."
 
Nazis tried to disarm this girl and her family in 1938...


Luckily for her Great Grand Daughter they didn't succeed!


...Learning from History!



Just a thought.

Regards,
HS/LD
 
Let me be negatively positive; offer some constructive criticism.

As a viewer, I am denied a complete image. What, these girls have no feet? An image cropped has a similar effect on the concept; incomplete. In this case, the crediblity of the message lacks "grounding" in reality; becomes illusory.

May be much easier to complete caption with an entire image.
Complete the human subjects and it will complete the concept.
Especially with the "period" clothing they're wearing.

(Not claiming to know better; just HTH.)
 
Nazis tried to disarm this girl and her family in 1938..Luckily for her Great Grand Daughter they didn't succeed!.

I like this one too. Though grand-daughter seems more in keeping with timeframe.

May I suggest, as the final hook phrase, "Learn from history...or repeat it"
 
Maybe have one of the girls wear some Jewish paraphernalia just to make it a little more obvious?

How about saying if it can't happen in America, point out how Jewish immigrants were turned around (I think?)
 
"With this suppressed HK I can whack bad guys and still hear the phone ring!"

:)

- Gabe
 
My 2 cents

I'd like to see "Nazis" in the opener replaced by "Hitler"; I think the name focuses the evil more clearly. Perhaps change "didn't" to "disobeyed"...

Then I'd like to see the Santayana quote, attributed, as the "punchline."

"Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it."
 
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I wanted to use both images for contrast, but the single old-timey photo seems to work better. Relies on some knowledge of history by the viewer though...
 
I like this last picture Oleg. What if it said "our kids" instead of "your kids"?

It's a powerful image.........Those who see it will understand.
 
IN 1938, NO ONE KNEW
THAT IN FIVE YEARS
THIS GIRL WOULD
HAVE TO FIGHT
FOR HER LIFE.


SHE KNEW HOW TO USE
THE TOOLS SHE NEEDED.

WOULD YOU?


I like the second poster with the one girl better. It has more impact.
 
Oleg,
I was talking about gun control in Canada with a customer yesterday and he related a story to me...

Seems he was living in the Ukraine when the Nazis invaded. The Ukraine goverment had imposed a mandatory registration a couple of years earlier, presumably to help the gov't prepare to organize a peasant army. When the Nazis rolled in to town, they went to the magistrates office and found out who owned guns. They then went around the town and searched every house.
There was this elderly gentleman who had an old gun that was not registered and they gathered he and all of his family that lived there, which was 3 generations of women & children (the men were off fighting in the Red Army) and brought them to the town square. The rest of the town was ordered to attend as well.
They lined up all 20 or so family members and machine-gunned them in front of the townsfolk.
- As the elderly gentleman explained this, the next part still brought a tear to his tired eyes...
After the family was mowed down, a Stormtooper went over to the corpse of a small boy, grabbed a leg, stepped on the other and ripped the tiny body in half. - It was his cousin and playmate...3 years old...


Shortly thereafter, his family managed to immigrate to Canada. He refuses to register his guns and says that he will never give them up.
I deeply respect his sentiments and his reasons for feeling this strongly...
 
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How about "Proud Parent of an Honors Sniper at Glenwood Elementary." :D

Honestly, I like the second one better. Adds some historical perspective while not as inflammatory as the girl with the Evil Black Rifle.
 
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