Oleg Volk
Moderator Emeritus
For different target audiences:
The reluctantly/gravest extreme/immediate danger is somewhat repetitive. I think you could drop everything past the 'gravest extreme' bit... but then your paragraphs wouldn't look balanced...Lawful gun owners use force reluctantly and only in the gravest extreme when their lives are in immediate danger
I understand your intent, but it's hard to get past the "mall ninja" impression on the second one.The couple are less threatening, but the big, well-armed guy shows that even "rambo" doesn't look for a fight.
The same image without most of the gear would make the point better.The point I wanted to make originally was that even 6"5' guys with serious fighting skills aren't itching for a fight. How to convey that best?
geekWithA.45 said:I thought peacekeepers wore stuff like this:
Oleg Volk said:I will likely re-use the other image. The point I wanted to make originally was that even 6"5' guys with serious fighting skills aren't itching for a fight. How to convey that best?
I will likely re-use the other image. The point I wanted to make originally was that even 6"5' guys with serious fighting skills aren't itching for a fight. How to convey that best?