New Online Fiction Story - Lost and Found

[wcwhitey]

Just read "Lights Out" over the last few days, excellent! I could hardly put it down! Bookmarked the new one, looking forward to reading it. Bill

 

[gunsmith]

thanks

Originally Posted By Halffast:
How does this story compare to LO in:

1. Readability?

2. Character development?

3. Plot?

1: Sorry, I can't comment because I like your stories so much that if it terrible I wouldn't even notice.
2:Gabe seems a little to good,dj a little to bad....and if dj were really that bad he would just take the nookie or barter for it along the way.
There was a choclate/coffee/cigg black market in ww2, I heard you could trade a pack of smokes for nookie in ww2 in Europe, I'm sure it would go that way in a matter of hours in a shtf situation.
I'm sure some cutie would latch herself on dj or he would have known a few "strippers" or the like that might be willing to "trade"...
3: see comment one.

 

[ChopperKen]

I hit the link but couldnt find the story.
What did I do wrong?

 

[wcwhitey]

Can anyone tell me or guide me to a link for "Bug Out". I loved "Lights Out" and could use more to read. Thanks, Bill

 

[meef]

http://www.thehighroad.org/showthread.php?t=172494

Bug Out.

 

[Halffast]

The story was moved and the link in the first post is no longer good. Here is the new link. http://www.ar15.com/forums/topic.html?b=10&f=20&t=483521

If one of the mods could edit the first post and change the link, I would really appreciate it. Thanks.

 

[Halffast]

Chapter 22 is posted. Thanks to all and Merry Christmas.



David

 

[Halffast]

Another new chapter is available. Thanks.

 

[sixgunner455]

DJ is such a jerk!!

 

[Caimlas]

Hey, any update Halffast? Where've you been for the last month? Doing OK?

 

[gunsmith]

hmm

a little difficult to believe a single mom would shoot herself, my ex would have shot DJ!

 

[Halffast]

Well, Chapter 25 is posted. This is probably going to be the last one I post. Thanks for all the support and keep an eye out for my next story, "Dead Reckoning".

David

 

[Charles S]

Thanks for the update!