So There I Was Again (Also Not Very Serious)

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EXCELLANT, Dude! I want to throw my thanks in with the others. I found myself at work wondering if Nightcrawler had finished another chapter or not - then rushing home to the puter to check!

I won't attempt to critique your work as it far outdoes any of my past feeble attempts at writing. I am in awe that you were able to write this ode AND make it to class. You didn't mention, though, if you caught up on your sleep in class.

Again, thanks and I am looking forward to the sequel...


Later
Jim
 
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Great story! You have genuine talent. I thoroughly enjoyed a story with some accurate firearms depictions. I unfortunately recently watched Matrix again. Argh. (If you're a firearms enthusiast, don't ever watch Matrix with the remote in your hand.)

Fortunately, I only recently found this thread, so got to read it in just a few sittings!

Grampa
 
I like the ending :evil:

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay, I'm famous!!!!!!!!!!! :cool: :D

Thanks Nightcrawler :cool:

Too bad the only place where I get the girl is a story on a gun forum :banghead: :barf:
 
I, being an impatient person, usually can not sit still for long periods. I always have to be doing something/anything physical. Nightcrawler; this "novel" has undoubtedly kept my intrest from the very first paragraph! A great read. No doubt you are very gifted..

:D ......Take this gift and run with it.....At least here on THR..:D


Thank You , MR. NIGHTCRAWLER.........:cool:
 
NC,
if Ling was the mafia lady that you wrote her out to be, wouldn't she have just shot off or crushed with the heel of a spiked shoe one of French's two best friends?.....and I don't mean his coke bag and snorting tube :evil:
 
Nightcrawler, I have been following your story since the first day. I haven't even read your conclusion and epilogue yet, because the first thing I do when I see you have a new installment is do a cut & paste to MS Word. As soon as I finish posting this, I'm going to go back and read them, on the board.

You have my word of honor as a gentleman and a Christian that I will not in any way try to profit from your story. I plan to copy it both to floppy and CD, but only for my own private entertainment. Should I ever decide to share it with someone, I will direct them first to this thread, and of course, give full credit to the author. I have it saved under the file name of "Nightcrawler's story."

Even withouth having read then end, I can say to you sir, Excellent Job!

May you have a blessed day.
 
From what I heard, Nightcrawler has been having more fun since that last story. Care to tell us about it, Nightcrawler?




(yes, this is a shameless plug for Nightcrawler, Part II.)
 
No Sequel

...At least, not now.

I've been told that my success with this story means I can never do it again, but we'll see.

In any case, there will be some changes in the final .doc version, whenever I get around to it. Some minor edits, some minor plot changes, things like that.
 
This annoying thread kept getting bumped and I never had time to read it. Now I want to finish my English/writing degree and come help Nightcrawler finish and edit his work. I only started reading this thread a few days ago and it took me several lunch breaks to get through it all. I loved it. I wish we had more. I do like the idea of starting a new section for people like you and Lawdog to put up stories. Some being fictional and some non-fiction. I love the writing.

My critiques would be Ling should have done the girl and slapped French, chewed him out, and then get so into it she had to be pulled off him. I don't know about all the grammar, spelling etc that would take a long time. Good job keep it up.

I have done several pieces myself, but none were written down. I spend a lot, I mean A LOT, of time driving so I come up with stories to keep myself from being bored or falling asleep. This by far beats all my stories.

I understand the midterms and school stuff. That is important and I hope you do well. Have fun.

PS I also hope you and Skunkabilly find girls you can have that are real and enjoy shooting and not shooting people.
 
Gus Dddysgrl...

Hey, I do the same thing, create stories; except now it's mostly in a rocking chair on the porch. Can't remember from chair to computer, not only dialogue, but the plot escapes too.

I'd recommend a pocket tape recorder to you - mine's broken. Maybe you can do better than me with it.

Don't stop. A lady with armament must have some good stories in her.

-Andy
 
Well, thank you for your compliments, Gus. Don't give up the writing!

Oh, and anyone who wants a .doc final copy of the story, PM me with "story" as the subject and I'll get it to you as soon as I finish it.

Wow...I have fans. That is SO COOL. :D

Just need to make sure it doesn't go to my head...

[BENDER]Wow! I'm even greater than I previously thought![/BENDER]


LOL
 
Nightcrawler VI..Lings revenge

I started reading this in a 70 degree room, its now 95 (how the *%^$ did that happen?) and I didn't notice it till I finished the thread. Good job, lots o' fun. I'd share some luck on the girl front, but I don't seem to have any either. Luck that is.
 
Why the Luminous PATH Triad?
Click to expand...

Stole the name from one of the two Chinese crime syndicates in the game Deus Ex.

Hey, when you're writing on the fly, you've gotta cut corners. :)

Gotten a few requests for a .doc version (which will be like the director's cut, with bonus material). Just PM me with "STORY" in the header if you want one. Keep feeding my swelling ego... :D
 
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