Sistema1927
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Roguerunner is new
Nine posts to his name we see
He will catch on fast
Nine posts to his name we see
He will catch on fast
Gun haiku
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Dionysusigma
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My user name is
Dionysusigma; too
Long to write a poem.
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Kalashnikov and Makarov
Plus comrade S. Simonov
Are famous each for their respective gun;
But from John Garand and JMB,
The M-1 and 1919
Are the best, if only 'cause we won.
Dionysusigma; too
Long to write a poem.
--
Kalashnikov and Makarov
Plus comrade S. Simonov
Are famous each for their respective gun;
But from John Garand and JMB,
The M-1 and 1919
Are the best, if only 'cause we won.
wheelgunslinger
Member
one ragged hole
but it jams again
my p3-4-5
a crow caws loudly
deer hoof crunches leaf
moth sits on arrow
but it jams again
my p3-4-5
a crow caws loudly
deer hoof crunches leaf
moth sits on arrow
pluvo
Member
Funny this should come up. I used to write poetry in my youth and at one time I was on a haiku discussion list. I was looked down upon because I didn't always use a 'nature' word in my haiku as required to be 'true' to form. Of course, I argued that mine were about the 'nature' of humanity.
On being not a vicim:
Synapses fire
Muscles expand and contract
Veins begin to burn.
A man f*cks with me
Knife slides smoothly between ribs
I continue on.
Man busts up my car
Run him down at ninety-five
New hood ornament.
Man breaks in my house
My gun barks twice, drag him in
Go on back to sleep.
A single gunshot,
Like blood-red punctuation,
Ending the sentence.
Sunlight glints off brass
Arcing gently through the air,
Landing at my feet.
The smell of cordite
Perfume in the rancid air
Burns at my nostrils.
As I stomp you down
Big black boots now black and red
A graphic footprint.
Hidden among us;
You cannot spot a killer
By the shoes he wears.
Cool acts of violence
I don't insult my victims
By feeling sorry.
A friend of mine & I used to ponder mimes in much the same way zombies are discussed here on THR:
Invisible box,
The man within shot once; twice,
What sound does he make?
Calliope plays
Another dead harlequin,
Blood stains a white face.
Silencer, of course
His gun is fast...mine faster,
Shots break the silence.
The now severed head
Takes the steps two at a time,
Smile still intact.
Written during the 1st Gulf War. Same as it ever was...
Foreign diplomats
Refuse to admit to their sins;
With insincere smiles.
Through the viewfinder,
Moonlight plays on quiet streets
In this strange city.
I wait in darkness,
And watch the war on TV,
Feeling only cold.
On being not a vicim:
Synapses fire
Muscles expand and contract
Veins begin to burn.
A man f*cks with me
Knife slides smoothly between ribs
I continue on.
Man busts up my car
Run him down at ninety-five
New hood ornament.
Man breaks in my house
My gun barks twice, drag him in
Go on back to sleep.
A single gunshot,
Like blood-red punctuation,
Ending the sentence.
Sunlight glints off brass
Arcing gently through the air,
Landing at my feet.
The smell of cordite
Perfume in the rancid air
Burns at my nostrils.
As I stomp you down
Big black boots now black and red
A graphic footprint.
Hidden among us;
You cannot spot a killer
By the shoes he wears.
Cool acts of violence
I don't insult my victims
By feeling sorry.
A friend of mine & I used to ponder mimes in much the same way zombies are discussed here on THR:
Invisible box,
The man within shot once; twice,
What sound does he make?
Calliope plays
Another dead harlequin,
Blood stains a white face.
Silencer, of course
His gun is fast...mine faster,
Shots break the silence.
The now severed head
Takes the steps two at a time,
Smile still intact.
Written during the 1st Gulf War. Same as it ever was...
Foreign diplomats
Refuse to admit to their sins;
With insincere smiles.
Through the viewfinder,
Moonlight plays on quiet streets
In this strange city.
I wait in darkness,
And watch the war on TV,
Feeling only cold.
Bruce333
Member
Yes,....I had to revive this thread...
got my C and R
milsurps sent straight to my door
my money all gone
got my C and R
milsurps sent straight to my door
my money all gone
El Tejon
Member
See old greasy gun
I plant the gun in the ground
I mock Pelosi.
I plant the gun in the ground
I mock Pelosi.
wuluf
Member
1911
reliable and lovely
a timeless design
reliable and lovely
a timeless design
the pistolero
Member
Big ugly Ruger
3 AM pounding at door
BOOM! BOOM! Dead goblin.
3 AM pounding at door
BOOM! BOOM! Dead goblin.
Jim March
Member
A goblin comes in,
357 flies true,
Oh WOW is he dead!
By the way, it's:
5
7
5
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Not by me, but one of the best gun-related short ditties ever:
"Here lies the body of Lester Moore,
Shot six times with a 44...
No Les, no more."
357 flies true,
Oh WOW is he dead!
By the way, it's:
5
7
5
--------
Not by me, but one of the best gun-related short ditties ever:
"Here lies the body of Lester Moore,
Shot six times with a 44...
No Les, no more."
Sage of Seattle
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Oh, guys! This is cool.
My normal poetry is either very romantic or pretty lewd. I'm thinking this is a good inspiration to write something new about something I love other than women.
Pistol in my hand
The ground carpeted by shells
My grin is wicked
My normal poetry is either very romantic or pretty lewd. I'm thinking this is a good inspiration to write something new about something I love other than women.
Pistol in my hand
The ground carpeted by shells
My grin is wicked
matis
Member
By sm: (post 13)
Tyranny Enough
Quill, Parchment, Muskets Spew Lead
We The People Free
By matis:
Freedom soured with time
Maybe soon need to water
Freedom's tree again
matis
Tyranny Enough
Quill, Parchment, Muskets Spew Lead
We The People Free
By matis:
Freedom soured with time
Maybe soon need to water
Freedom's tree again
matis
Warren
Member
Excellent work, people.
svtruth
Member
More
Loved the .44
Then I wanted some more
Buffalo Bore!
Loved the .44
Then I wanted some more
Buffalo Bore!
Stickjockey
Member
Sharp smell of sulphur
ball of flame, blueish smoke cloud
black powder is fun!
ball of flame, blueish smoke cloud
black powder is fun!
squeeze on the trigger
a fireball shoots through the air
Yeah, M Forty Four
bang bang bang bang bang
bang bang bang then there's a ping
I love my Garand
pull the bolt straight back
all six shots in the ten ring
K thrity ones Rock
evil black rifle
some say that its a mouse gun
AR fun to shoot
a fireball shoots through the air
Yeah, M Forty Four
bang bang bang bang bang
bang bang bang then there's a ping
I love my Garand
pull the bolt straight back
all six shots in the ten ring
K thrity ones Rock
evil black rifle
some say that its a mouse gun
AR fun to shoot
TexasRifleman
Moderator Emeritus
Lorcin by my side
Bad man knocking on the door
Oops I am dead man
Bad man knocking on the door
Oops I am dead man
Vitamin G
Member
M1 Garand Haiku :
BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG
BANG BANG BANG-PING, BANG BANG BANG
BANG BANG BANG BANG-PING
BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG
BANG BANG BANG-PING, BANG BANG BANG
BANG BANG BANG BANG-PING
TrapperReady
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Sunlight warms the frost
Shots ring out both near and far
It's opening day.
It's Wayne LaPierre
Recorded voice on my phone
He wants more money.
Gun dog stops on dime
Tail upright, body frozen
I'd better not miss.
Shots ring out both near and far
It's opening day.
It's Wayne LaPierre
Recorded voice on my phone
He wants more money.
Gun dog stops on dime
Tail upright, body frozen
I'd better not miss.
Squidward
Member
Haiku envy
Squidward wants to play
Tried to script a gun Haiku
Shot self in the foot
Squidward wants to play
Tried to script a gun Haiku
Shot self in the foot
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