I didn't really think it was worth the time it took to read. He makes a great case for LEOs and military use. Then he hobbles something together for civilian use. He should have picked his thesis and tried to nail it as much as possible.
It would have been better if he put it in context with examples, statistics, and useful information. As it is, it comes across as nearly pointless. He also came across with a huge goof saying that cartridges hadn't advanced any. A modern Winchester PDX hollow point is light years beyond the old Silver Tip.
If I had turned that in to my English 112 professor she would have marked the whole thing with a red "X."
Ofcourse, if she saw my spelling and grammar on THR, she would probably beat me with a Norton's Anthology of World Literature. It would be very similar to a cop using a phone book on a perp.